7th Dec 2019, 10:24 PM
Wow, okay so looks like I've caught up! So first of, I love your colors and how expressive your art is. The format that feels kind of animatic-ish is really cool and something I haven't seen before? I'm not an especially prolific reader, so maybe it already exists commonly, but it was unique for me. The gifs are a really nice touch whenever they show up too.

Anyways, actual story! The whole concept of time distortion is super cool, and the mechanics and world around that. Riley's kind of a bitch, but it's understandable how they got there. I appreciate every thought of escape and that roadblock in the way. Lucy's just fun and her dynamic with Riley is just great to watch. I also just love her design.

I'm really excited to see where things go from here! Thanks for providing me a source of procrastination :v
8th Dec 2019, 1:53 AM
What an absolutely lovely comment 8w8 You've got me all flushed, haha!

The format was originally inspired by the likes of Homestuck and Neokosmos, but I've since adjusted it to my needs (like the speech bubbles, gifs and etc!). I'm glad the world and character interractions are interesting so far ;v; we're still at quite an early stage in the story so things will continue developing from here!

Thank you!!! I hope you keep reading <3 <3 <3
8th Dec 2019, 12:41 AM
Woah, that took a while!

Love the story. Your style really brings out the characters’ personalities before we get to know them!

I also love the GiFs you use for the things that cannot be drawn in one picture.

This plot is really interesting, and super unique. I’m excited to see more from you!

(Remember to take breaks if needed, and have fun in general! <3)
8th Dec 2019, 2:27 PM
Thank you so much!!! 8w8 I'm glad you enjoy the style and the story and the little gif additions. I've definitely been taking breaks, maybe for a little too long (university does that to you) but thank you anyhow! ;A; <3

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