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11th Jan 2022, 8:30 PM
Oh wow- Elli actually might've found a way to get Riley to WANT to practice their abilities- that takes skill :0
12th Jan 2022, 1:03 AM
ah. and here i thought they were going to have fun
12th Jan 2022, 3:39 PM
Best way to teach is when you also can have fun.
13th Jan 2022, 3:03 AM
Exactly! :D
13th Jan 2022, 12:42 AM
What a smart way to get Riley to WANT to try to practice.
16th Jan 2022, 5:25 PM
aaaaaand done. just finished rereading the entirety of the comic. this has been very enjoyable, it's just as good as i remember it if not better, and now i also spot some of the cool things i missed on my first read. your art has definitely improved over the years, and it's nice to see this story develop. i'd say the writing has been good all the way through, and it even got a giggle from me from time to time. the characters and the dynamics between them are very enjoyable too. i like riley, as i can relate to them, though i do think they take it too far at times. lucy is a little gremlin, and the rest of the cast is also very interesting. i also like the character designs. they can tell you a lot about the characters just by looking at them, and that's not to mention body language and such. sorry if this is too long, haha.
18th Jan 2022, 10:57 PM
I really appreciate the comments, thank you! :D I'm glad there's still value to be found in the older pages, even if they're a bit lost on me now. And ah, I'm glad you like the character designs and personalities too! Hope you stick around for more!

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